You live in a small university town. Last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn't even switch on. Write to the store. In your letter: tell the store where you live & what happened explain the problem with the laptop state what action you would like the store to take

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Dear Sir,
This
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letter is with regard to my purchase of a new Dell
laptop
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from your store
last
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week,
currently
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the
laptop
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is not working. I will narrate the situation, I got
this
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laptop
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on a promotional offer from your valuable store. As am staying in a
village
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i
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couldn't buy a
laptop
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from my
village
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as there were no promotions going on here, at that time I saw your advertisement for a
laptop
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promotion. As that was an urgent requirement I drove two hours from my
village
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to your store to get
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laptop
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. I exactly don't know what happened as it got shut off all of a sudden, and I can't even complete my project.
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project I need to submit
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a two weeks time period. Am having the bill, as it is having a one-year warranty I request you to send someone for repairs or you can guide me to the nearest service centre in my
village
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. Request you to take my case seriously and do the needful for immediate repairs. Thank you Jayaprakash
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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