You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to bring to your attention that I and my family recently visited your restaurant and were unhappy with the served
food
.
I visited the hotel with my friends and family on 14th February to celebrate my wife's birthday. We were extremely excited and were planning the event for the last
one
month. The event started as expected, but someone turned off the music in the middle of the program, after asking I was told it was an electricity outage. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Furthermore
, when the food
arrived, it was half cooked
and the salt was very high. All of my friends who are Add a hyphen
half-cooked
found
of eating meatCorrect your spelling
fond
,
refused to eat the same. It was very Remove the comma
apply
disapointing
to see the Correct your spelling
disappointing
food
getting wasted.
I would like to request you to
avoid Fix the infinitive
apply
such
circumstances in future and make sure you run a standard operating procedure before handing over the food
to customers such
as a quality check. Secondly
, please keep power back-up, for instance
, electricity generators to smoothly run your business.
I will appreciate it if you please take the above mentioned
action to help your customers and avoid any future inconvenience.
Yours sincerely,
TrilochanAdd a hyphen
above-mentioned
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite