You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address.

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to bring to your attention that I and my family recently visited your restaurant and were unhappy with the served
food
. I visited the hotel with my friends and family on 14th February to celebrate my wife's birthday. We were extremely excited and were planning the event for the
last
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month. The event started as expected, but someone turned off the music in the middle of the program, after asking I was told it was an electricity outage.
Furthermore
, when the
food
arrived, it was
half cooked
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and the salt was very high. All of my friends who are
found
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of eating meat
,
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refused to eat the same. It was very
disapointing
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disappointing
to see the
food
getting wasted. I would like to request you
to
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avoid
such
circumstances in future and make sure you run a standard operating procedure before handing over the
food
to customers
such
as a quality check.
Secondly
, please keep power back-up,
for instance
, electricity generators to smoothly run your business. I will appreciate it if you please take the
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action to help your customers and avoid any future inconvenience. Yours sincerely, Trilochan
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