The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of users of subway stations in London between six a.m
. and ten p
.m
. Overall
, the busiest time is eight a.m
. at 400 people.
At six a.m
., there are only 100 train users. The number
increases dramatically and reaches its peak in two hours. After that, passengers decrease by half. By the time of 14 p
.m
., the users rose slightly to 300 and dropped to the same number
as the starting hour.
In the evening hour, the passengers skyrocket to just less the 400, which is the second largest number
in a day. It can be seen that there are approximately 125 at 20 p
.m
. There is a little increase in an hour and ,finally
end up with about 150 people at 22 Add a comma
,finally
p
.m
.Submitted by miku.love15 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, m, p with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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