IN MANY COUNTRIES, THE TRADITION OF FAMILIES HAVING MEALS TOGETHER IS DISAPPEARING. WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? WHAT WILL BE THE EFFECT OF IT ON THE FAMILY AND SOCIETY?
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tradition
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the tradition
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their
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a consequence
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on our relatives and community.
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decease
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disease
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the pandemic
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overtime-work
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the disequilibrium
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meals
can have several detrimental effects on the family. From the perspective of family, Use synonyms
meals
taken together are the main feature to create Use synonyms
stable
family background. Add an article
the stable
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eating together, the family bonds are likely to be loosened and Change preposition
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as a result
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a child
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children
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feel
cold
atmosphere and lack of affection from their parents. Correct article usage
a cold
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, those lonely children are the future of our next generation, and they will format the world Linking Words
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full of mentally damaged citizens.
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meals
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due to
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different
schedules of each member and Correct article usage
the different
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the pandemic
this
tradition is vanishing. Family members should take Linking Words
meals
together and parents should teach their child Use synonyms
importance
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the importance
meals
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