The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter regarding job vacancies in the school library over summer break. I am a student of your college and recently I have completed

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course in Management. I was looking for opportunities during my summer break to learn and develop new skills and coincidently I came across the advertisement on the school notice board. I have learned different skills related to micro and macro management in my study course, which I think will be useful

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working as an intern in the library. On top of

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I have successfully completed my three months

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in a public administrative office, where I handled documentation and computers to collate data from different sources. I believe these skills will definitely help me to become a competent library assistant. I am really looking forward

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job as I want some practical experience before starting my corporate journey.

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, I will appreciate

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my help to my own college. Looking forward

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your positive response. Yours faithfully, Aishwarya

Submitted by Aishwarya on Sun Feb 12 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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