You read an advertisement about in the local newspapers about a discount sale at a particular shop. However, when you meet to buy the goods you wanted, you found the sale had ended. Write to the shop manager. In your letter, -inform him/her where and when you went to the shop -what you felt when you came to know that the sale had ended -demand compensation for the goods you wanted to buy

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Dear Manager I regret to write

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letter as I could not get the required stuff during the discount sale at your store despite I reached the store which is located on 10th street in New Westminster city on time as per given advertisement in the newspaper.

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, I live very close to

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location and have been a couple of times to grab my stuff. When I got that news regarding the ongoing sale ending and not continuing anymore as there is not enough stuff and I felt very disappointed and exhausted.

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, I had given a commitment to my spouse on

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deal and I worried to go home with an empty hand.

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was a nightmare which I cannot think of in my dream as well. As you heard, I was terrified by

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shock and I would demand you to please do something to compensate to mitigate my situation as you guys cannot make it happen as you mentioned in the promotion offer. I look forward to hearing an update to

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letter and I would really appreciate it if you could consider

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letter with utmost urgency and provide some additional discount from your store. Yours faithfully Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sun Feb 12 2023

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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