In most successful companies, some people think that communicaton between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that the main important component for the
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success is arguable.
While
it is a
commonoly
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commonly
held belief that the strong contact between the managers and the
workers
is essential.
On the other hand
, other argue that there
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other factors
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be more serious. In the forthcoming paragraph, I shall explain both
view
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and give my opinion. There are some people who argue that the benefits of making
strong
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relationship between the company director and the
workers
considerably outweigh the demerits. The main reason for believing
this
is that having good
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with the company employees may
leads
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to the success of the job.
For instance
, when the person feels that the manager
appreciate
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his
work
and
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him like family, they will perform perfectly better in the task.
Consequently
, people will produce
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high quality
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job
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as they will not be under pressure.
Thus
, it makes clear that treating the
workers
well is a very
curcial
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crucial
components
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of the
work
.
On the other hand
, other people believe that having a good bond with the job employee is not
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crucial
as there
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many other important elements. It is often argued that
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needs to be
more firm
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with
workers
and keep the
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and focus on
work
only. To illustrate, some companies offer
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individuals high salaries ,
however
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they give them
high
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load of
work
.
Moreover
, they even provide them with
work
at the weekend.
Consequently
,
workers
might prefer high income as it will cover their needs. Indeed, it becomes apparent that other elements
such
as high income can be more essential for
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accompolishment
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accomplishment
accomplishments
. In conclusion, both arguments have
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merits. On balance,
however
, I strongly believe that the most essential element for the company to succeed
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building a strong relationship between directors and the
workers
as it may lead to a higher quality of production.
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