You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given table shows information about males and females who worked in England
factories
between 1851 and 1901.
Overall
, it can be clearly noticed that the
number
of employees decreased over the years.
While
the
number
of
factories
had fluctuated in the provided period. Looking at the table in detail, the
number
of men who worked in
factories
in 1851 was higher than women with 287,100 male employees compared to 190,000 females. There was a significant drop off 20 years later with less than half of the
workers
in comparison to 1851.
However
, the factory's
number
had tripled from 225 to 622. In 1881, male
workers
slightly fell to 76,132 and female
workers
kept falling gradually with a 10,000 difference. In regards to the
number
of
factories
, there was a raise of almost 100
factories
.
At the end
of the period, the
number
of
workers
of both genders was approximately equal percentage.
Whereas
factories
number
declined to 600.
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