The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give
the
information about the American’s consumption of 3 types of nutrients namely Correct article usage
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sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar in different meals .
Overall
, it is obvious that while
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sodium
and fat have same
tendencies when both Correct article usage
the same
used
for Add a missing verb
are used
dinner
mostly . Unlikely , the figure of
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show
that people tend to add Change the verb form
shows
this
to snacks .
Firstly
, the percentage of sodium
is quite similar to this
of fat , which dinner
have a third with 43% and 37% and higher than three meals . In
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other
hand , people who have lunch consume Correct article usage
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second
highest that approximately a fourth . Correct article usage
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sodium
spent for breakfast is as same 14% as snacks , in saturated fat ‘ s aspects , the use of this
in breakfast is lower around 5% than for fast food
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dinner
, likely 2 types with 16% and 19% . The ratio used for snacks become the highest number which is over a third and lastly
, the sugar consumption for dinner
is fewer about 19% than that .Submitted by honglethiminh1975 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, dinner with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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