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The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.

The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
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The line graph depicts how many
wood
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-made-production are made in the UK between 1980 and 2000. The products are categorised into three; paper & packaging,
wood
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 pulps and sawn
wood
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. The unit is a
million
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-tone.
Overall
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 the paper & packing was the largest production throughout the given period. The amount of paper & packing was about 275
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980. There was a slight increase to 250 in 10 years and reached the highest point at 350
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000. The sawn
wood
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 was the second largest amount of production in the first given period at 200
million
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 tones,
while
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 the
wood
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 pulp was at approximately 175
million
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 tones. Both products dropped to 150
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990. In the next 10 years, those products showed a different trend. The sawn
wood
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 slightly continued decreasing to 125
million
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 tones.
On the other hand
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, the
wood
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-plus rose to more than 150
million
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tonnes
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 in the
last
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 period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wood, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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