The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which rainwater is collected and purified to provide drinking water
for household usage in a town in Australia. It is readily apparent that the process
involves five main steps, which start when rainwater is collected by a drainage system and ends
when filtered and treated Correct subject-verb agreement
end
water
is pumped into people’s accommodations for domestic consumption. Looking at the detail, initially
Add a comma
initially,
water
falling down onto rooftops is collected via a series of drains which lead to an underground water
filter. Subsequently
, the filtered water
is transported by pipe to a large tank for storage prior to treatment. In the second half of the process
, water
is pumped into a second tank where chemicals are added to purify the water
and make it drinkable. In the last
step of the process
, the water
is pumped back into houses to be used from the tap as drinking water
by households.Submitted by bobong120906 on
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