The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an  Australian town.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make  comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which rainwater is collected and purified to provide drinking
water
for household usage in a town in Australia. It is readily apparent that the
process
involves five main steps, which start when rainwater is collected by a drainage system and
ends
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when filtered and treated
water
is pumped into people’s accommodations for domestic consumption. Looking at the detail,
initially
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water
falling down onto rooftops is collected via a series of drains which lead to an underground
water
filter.
Subsequently
, the filtered
water
is transported by pipe to a large tank for storage prior to treatment. In the second half of the
process
,
water
is pumped into a second tank where chemicals are added to purify the
water
and make it drinkable. In the
last
step of the
process
, the
water
is pumped back into houses to be used from the tap as drinking
water
by households.
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