The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which rainwater is collected and purified to provide drinking Use synonyms
water
for household usage in a town in Australia. It is readily apparent that the Use synonyms
process
involves five main steps, which start when rainwater is collected by a drainage system and Use synonyms
ends
when filtered and treated Correct subject-verb agreement
end
water
is pumped into people’s accommodations for domestic consumption. Looking at the detail, Use synonyms
Linking Words
initially
Add a comma
initially,
water
falling down onto rooftops is collected via a series of drains which lead to an underground Use synonyms
water
filter. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the filtered Linking Words
water
is transported by pipe to a large tank for storage prior to treatment. In the second half of the Use synonyms
process
, Use synonyms
water
is pumped into a second tank where chemicals are added to purify the Use synonyms
water
and make it drinkable. In the Use synonyms
last
step of the Linking Words
process
, the Use synonyms
water
is pumped back into houses to be used from the tap as drinking Use synonyms
water
by households.Use synonyms
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