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Health sector in the world is in the path of tremendous progress however, a pandemic or wide spreading diseases can block the pace of the advancement. How it may affect countries in its social and economic development and what are the consequences it can bring into the world.

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pandemic
 is something
this
 world cannot avoid. it may appear anytime and spread really fast.
this
 thing could cause terrible effects in many sectors of the world ,especially in social and economic developments.
this
 essay will give a perspective on
this
 issue.
pandemic
 or wide spreading diseases can be one of the reasons
of
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economic development stop or even become worse. as an example, in 2019 coronavirus came and attack almost every nation in the world.
as a result
 it gave a sudden impact
to
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 many countries. many parties apply a lockdown and it caused a catastrophe in economic sectors. there are tons of
people
 who lost their job, many
company
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companies
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 collapsed and even import and export activities are closed. not only in the economic sector,
the social life of many
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but the social life of many people is also
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people
 is affected because of
this
 situation.
people
 need to adapt to communicate with others from afar. they have to limit their face-to-face communication and use more social media to make contact. some
people
 are getting used to it
while
 others have
a
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difficulty doing it.
on the other hand
, after the
pandemic
 was over, many
people
 still used
this
 method to
work
 and it gave a good impact that they can
work
 anywhere not only in their office.
to conclude
,
pandemic
 give
a
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various
effect
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effects
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to
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 different parties. it cost a lot for some
people
 who
loss
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lose
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 their company or their job but it
also
give
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 other
people
 chance to create
a
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new
bussines
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business
 to survive. at the same,
people
 are getting used to
work
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working
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 remotely
for example
 from home so they can save time but
they
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can still
work
 and have a social life around.
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