Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that in many cities around the world. There are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from Owen cars?

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tend to have their own personal vehicle;

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, the traffic jam has increased rapidly and I believe

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the rapid advances in urban life, cities have become extremely large, which is hard

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to places within more than half an

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distance, so it is much easier and more profitable for

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to use their own cars. traffic jams

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become a major

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in the world. Fortunately, it can be controlled.

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.To illustrate, the vast majority of individuals are not properly informed of the possible

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of congested roads that are filled with cars. the authority plays an imperative part in order to

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people

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out extensive awareness

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strict implementation.

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to actively take part in their eco-friendly projects.

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from using their personal vehicles by charging high taxes and additional fees.

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they can

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funds on modern equipment to improve

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the traffic jam has increased rapidly

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of the huge amount of car

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contribution

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of every

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and the intervention from the authority we are able to control

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problem

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