Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that in many cities around the world. There are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from Owen cars?

It is argued that nowadays, the vast majority of
people
tend to have their own personal vehicle;
Consequently
, the traffic jam has increased rapidly and I believe
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huge part of the
problem
can be solved
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the
governmental
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hand.
To begin
with,
due to
the rapid advances in urban life, cities have become extremely large, which is hard
commuting
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to places within more than half an
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distance, so it is much easier and more profitable for
people
to use their own cars. traffic jams
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become a major
problem
in the world. Fortunately, it can be controlled.
Firstly
, the lack of awareness is probably by far the main reason why we have
this
problem
.To illustrate, the vast majority of individuals are not properly informed of the possible
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of congested roads that are filled with cars. the authority plays an imperative part in order to
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people
by
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out extensive awareness
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and
also
strict implementation.
In addition
, they can
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people
to actively take part in their eco-friendly projects.
For instance
, discouraging
people
from using their personal vehicles by charging high taxes and additional fees.
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they can
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funds on modern equipment to improve
the
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public
transportations
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. In conclusion,
clearly
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the traffic jam has increased rapidly
as a result
of the huge amount of car
ownerships
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.
However
,
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contribution
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of every
individuals
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and the intervention from the authority we are able to control
this
problem
.
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