Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request admission to the school for my

son

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. I am a bank employee and as per the government policy, employees have to relocate to different cities every two years,

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, I have to move to your town

along with

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my wife and

son

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. As you know we are in the middle of the academic session, it would be really helpful if you could admit my

son

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to your education centre and help us continue his studies. My

son

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, Trilo Singh, is very sincere and knowledgeable in his studies, he secured 92% in the

last

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academic term. He is

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very good at athletics and was awarded medals during the annual sports competition. As your school encourages kids to perform extracurricular activities which match our

son

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's interests, it would be an honour for our kid to be a part of your school's family. Thank you for your understanding of

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difficult situation and I am looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Trilochan Singh

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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173 words

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