In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction, causing high levels of water and air pollution. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

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In the past few years,there is a drastic change in the environment because of industrialisation and growth in construction.
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, these are not the only causes of the change these play a major role. I feel these can be prevented by taking some responsive measures. First of all, people should be more sensible and act
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. Everyone should have a responsibility towards nature.
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every individual is being educated about the pollutants and their causes of it no one is really showing interest towards them. Water and air are getting contaminated by industrial waste.
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the construction of heavy buildings, raw material is
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getting high. In order to produce that material the contamination is
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being increased
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becoming the cycle .
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is more significant in emerging countries like India, China and etc...
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, plants play a major aspect in decreasing air pollution.
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, one tree can inhale more per cent of carbon dioxide and exhale oxygen for the outer world. The industries should plan on more sustainable solutions to reduce e-waste and chemical waste.
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building an organisation or a firm , they should use more eco-friendly and less hazardous materials.
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of going for fancy-looking items they should lean towards recyclable and more lasting products. The government should come up with more strict rules for organisations on the prevention of environmental hazards.
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, It is not just the development of the nation but we have to protect our mother earth. Every person should equally contribute towards protecting
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planet.
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