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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compared
Australian's
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Australians'
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habit
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habits
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 of
coffee
 and
tea
 purchasing and drinking in
last
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the last
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 month in Sydney,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
 and Hobart. It is noticeable that
Australian
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Australians
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 seldom purchased fresh
coffee
 compared to the majority of residents
had
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who had
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coffee
 and
tea
 in a
cafe
' in
last
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the last
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 four weeks in five cities
beside
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besides
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Adelaide
.
According to
 the analysis, above fifty
proportion
 of local people had
coffee
 and
tea
 in a
cafe'in
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cafe in
cafe
last
 month in Sydney,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
 and Hobart. The highest of having
coffee
 and
tea
 in a
cafe
' was almost 65
proportion
 in
Melbourne
, but the
proportion
 of having
coffee
 and
tea
 in a
cafe
'
below
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was below
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 50
proportion
 in
Adelaide
. The
proportion
 of residents
bought
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who bought
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 fresh
coffee
 was below 50
percentage
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percent
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 in five countries, and the lowest
proportion
 of having fresh
coffee
 was
roghly
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roughly
 35
percentage
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per cent
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 in
Brisbane
 in
last
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the last
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 4 weeks.
Overall
, it illustrates that residents having
coffee
 and
tea
 in a
cafe
'
was
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in was
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highest
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the highest
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proportion
, in
cntrast
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contrast
 to, having fresh and instant
coffee
in
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apply
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last
 month in Sydney,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
 and Hobart.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, cafe, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 7 times.
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