Some people think that the Olympic Games is an exciting event and can bring nations together. Others, however, think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The main purpose of

games

is that it is meant to be played together and to have fun

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Olympic

Games

is an event where different champions over the

world

come to compete for their

Olympic

medals and their name nationwide. It is

also

a very great way of keeping yourself healthy and active.

Olympic

Games

are held every year throughout the

world

with different types of

sport

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champions

compete

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against each other in their best field, even fans worldwide come together to watch them perform or they watch through media stations

such

as YouTube, TV etc. Different presidents and royal standards come and meet together and watch these champions compete.

Olympics

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The Olympics

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does bring different communities and nations together by globalizing the event which results in various people regardless of their caste, religion, gender etc

to come

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coming

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together and

enjoy

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enjoying

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this

wonderful event. I personally disagree to think that it is a waste of

money

but

infact

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in fact

many different sports and events raise

money

for charity and help millions of poor people

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for example

the SDMN vs YT football match that raised

money

to end

world

hunger. In conclusion,

Olympic

Games

does

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a very good job

in

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of

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bringing nations together and

also

raising

money

for charity and for the poor economical state of the

world

.