The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts give information about the several sectors of

industry

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that affected the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

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, in 2000, the most significant source of Turkey's economy were Agriculture

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Healthcare and Education, which together accounted for almost half of

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Turkey

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Turkey's

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Economy,

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in 2016 the sectors that dominated were Healthcare and Education, Trade, utilities and transportation and agriculture. In terms of the

industry

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sector

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, Agriculture, leisure and hospitality and Government

sector

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showed

slight

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backfall to 14%, 16%, and 9% respectively.

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, in 2000, construction contributed 3% which rose significantly to 10% 16 years later. With regards to the remaining

industry

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sector

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, manufacturing and Finance, business and others accounted for 8% and 5% in 2000,

afterwich

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after which

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climbed marginally to 12% and 8%. There was growth in the Trade and transportation

sector

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about 2% to 16% in 2016. Healthcare and education,

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, was the only

industry

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sector

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that remained steady for the given period of time.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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