The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give information about the several sectors of
industry
that affected the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
Overall
, in 2000, the most significant source of Turkey's economy were Agriculture
and
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Healthcare and Education, which together accounted for almost half of
the
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Turkey
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Economy,
while
in 2016 the sectors that dominated were Healthcare and Education, Trade, utilities and transportation and agriculture. In terms of the
industry
sector
, Agriculture, leisure and hospitality and Government
sector
showed
slight
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backfall to 14%, 16%, and 9% respectively.
On the other hand
, in 2000, construction contributed 3% which rose significantly to 10% 16 years later. With regards to the remaining
industry
sector
, manufacturing and Finance, business and others accounted for 8% and 5% in 2000,
afterwich
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after which
after wich
climbed marginally to 12% and 8%. There was growth in the Trade and transportation
sector
about 2% to 16% in 2016. Healthcare and education,
however
, was the only
industry
sector
that remained steady for the given period of time.
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