You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
graph
reflects the relationship between the Use synonyms
income
percentage of people residing in the US and the UK with expenditure on Use synonyms
fuel
. Three classes including the poorest, middle-Use synonyms
income
men and the richest are mentioned on the Use synonyms
graph
.
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Overall
, the ratio is inversely proportional for people living in the US. A poor person spent more than 5% of his total Linking Words
income
on Use synonyms
fuel
which is the peak point for people of all sorts of Use synonyms
income
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whereas
, a person belonging to Linking Words
privileged
class spent Correct article usage
the privileged
least
amount of his Change the article
the least
income
which is close to 2%.Use synonyms
On the contrary
, the Linking Words
graph
is directly proportional to the population of the UK. The Use synonyms
graph
for Use synonyms
fuel
cost increases with respect to Use synonyms
income
.
It is clear from the data that for the UK,the lowest expense on Use synonyms
fuel
is somewhat close to 0.5% of a poor person’s Use synonyms
income
.The expenditure ,Use synonyms
however
, dwindles between 2.5% to approximately 4% for a middle-class man Linking Words
whereas
, for the upper class it remains between 3% to 4% of a person’s total Linking Words
income
.Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the ratio is the opposite for residents of the US where 4% to approximately 5.5% of a poor man’s Linking Words
income
goes on Use synonyms
fuel
expenses ,unlike the upper class where they spent only 2 % of their total Use synonyms
income
on Use synonyms
fuel
.Use synonyms
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