You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
graph
reflects the relationship between the
income
percentage of people residing in the US and the UK with expenditure on
fuel
. Three classes including the poorest, middle-
income
men and the richest are mentioned on the
graph
.
Overall
, the ratio is inversely proportional for people living in the US. A poor person spent more than 5% of his total
income
on
fuel
which is the peak point for people of all sorts of
income
whereas
, a person belonging to
privileged
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class spent
least
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the least
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amount of his
income
which is close to 2%.
On the contrary
, the
graph
is directly proportional to the population of the UK. The
graph
for
fuel
cost increases with respect to
income
. It is clear from the data that for the UK,the lowest expense on
fuel
is somewhat close to 0.5% of a poor person’s
income
.The expenditure ,
however
, dwindles between 2.5% to approximately 4% for a middle-class man
whereas
, for the upper class it remains between 3% to 4% of a person’s total
income
.
On the other hand
, the ratio is the opposite for residents of the US where 4% to approximately 5.5% of a poor man’s
income
goes on
fuel
expenses ,unlike the upper class where they spent only 2 % of their total
income
on
fuel
.
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