The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures show the layout of a science
park
in 2008 and the changes that have taken place up until now. Taken as a whole, the
park
has gone through a number of major changes, with the most significant one being the construction of new features, which have been made possible at the expense of green spaces. It is
also
evident that the road infrastructure in the
park
's perimeter has been significantly upgraded. In 2008, the
park
was accessible from the western, eastern and northeastern sides by car. There was a car
park
in the
centre
of the science
park
for visitors, which served the purpose of a bridge between business units in the west and the cyber security building in the southeast. Other major building complexes: a round-shaped IT
centre
and offices adjoining the reception were
also
part of the science
park
. We can
also
see a railroad stretching from the west to the east in the southern part of the plan, and the remaining territory was either woodland or grassland. By now, a large number of developments have occurred in the
park
. Included in these were the construction research and development building to the left-hand side of offices, the conversion of the reception into a university hub, and the enlargement of the cyber security premises (now it has an L-shape).
Moreover
, the existing IT
centre
has been converted into an innovation
centre
,
while
the car
park
has been approximately halved in size.
Finally
, transport facilities have been improved in the area by building a railroad station, laying brand-new footpaths throughout, building a bus station in the east, and adding a separate lane for cyclists.
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