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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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A glance at the line graph provided reveals the amount of emitted carbon dioxide gases per
person
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 in four countries (The
UK
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, Sweeden, Italy and Portugal) from 1967 to 2007. In detail, in 1967, the highest volume of CO2 was in the
UK
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,
whereas
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 the lowest was in Portugal, accounting for approximately 10.8 and 1.2 metric tonnes per
person
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. The number of carbon
emissions
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 per
person
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 in the
UK
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 gradually decreased over 4 years, which accounted for nearly 9 metric tonnes in 2007. In Portugal, the average CO2
emissions
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 per individual were 5 times higher in 2007 in comparison to that in 1967. Moving on to the other countries, the average CO2
emissions
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 per
person
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 in Sweeden increased significantly and reached the highest point in 1977 at around 10.2 metric tonnes, after which it dramatically declined and was equal to the figure of Portugal in 2007.
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, the number of CO2 gases per human in Italy in 2007 doubled compared to 1967.
Overall
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, the average carbon dioxide
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 per
person
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 maintained a top position in the
UK
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 despite the fact that it experienced a steady decline in a given period,
while
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 the lowest volume of CO2
emissions
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 was in Portugal, which experienced consistent growth.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words person, uk, co, emissions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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