The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.
The charts illustrate the expenditure of households in a particular European country
was
spent on kinds of goods and services in 1958 and in 2008.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
the percentage of food and housing were
higher than that of others in both years. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Moreover
, the money of
clothing Change preposition
for
apporximately
Correct your spelling
approximately
remain
unchanged.
In 1958, the proportion of food was higher than the figures for housing with the former standing at 32% and the latter being at 22%. The percentage of Entertainment was nearly twice as much as that of Luxury goods, at 13% and 7% respectively. The expenditure Change the verb form
remains
of
clothing was 18% which Change preposition
on
double
in Add a missing verb
was double
size
of travel at 8%.
In 2008, the proportion of housing increased dramatically, Correct article usage
the size
peaked
at 32%, Wrong verb form
peaking
while
the opposite was true in food, at 12%. The percentage of luxury goods and travels
rose significantly and Fix the agreement mistake
travel
were
the same, at 17%. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
In addition
, the expenditure of
entertainment decreased sharply to 6%. Clothing Change preposition
on
was
experienced a Unnecessary verb
apply
slightly
drop Change the adverb
slight
by
2%.Change preposition
of
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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