Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developed

countries

were used to donate a charitable sum of money to poorer

countries

but it does not resolve the

poverty

issue. There are other means to reach out

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helping hand aside from financial aid support.

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the same view.

First world

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countries

express their support for poorer

countries

in the long run by giving financial reinforcements. They thought that it can help those

countries

to rise from

poverty

that keeps on drowning them. Countless acts of interventions are being executed to back them up

such

as

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donations through non-governmental organizations, charities and campaigns.

As a result

,

poverty

is still rampant and very difficult to eradicate. Since donating money cannot resolve the ongoing dilemma of third-world

countries

, there are other ways to support them. One way is to impart knowledge about different means of livelihood programs by giving them lectures,

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and seminars. Update them about the new technologies and social media platforms that can be used as a medium in promoting their produced goods and well-known product within their area.

In addition

, rich

countries

should lend a hand in changing the mindset of those people in poorer

countries

when it comes to the availability of resources for their necessities

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they should always

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in their

minds

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that

although

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foreign help is always available, the change should

also

come from them.

Also

, empower them to advertise their

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tourist spots thereby attracting more tourists that can help increase the status of their country’s economy. Money can aid in resolving many problems worldwide. It may be

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key

in

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resolving

poverty

specially

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for those living in underdeveloped and poor

countries

.

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, I completely agree that there

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various and better ways to address

this

kind of issue.