You recently stayed in a hotel and an employee was very helpful to you. Write a letter to the hotel management to tell them what happened. In your letter: Describe the situation Explain what happened Say what you would like the manager to do

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Dear
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Stark, I am writing to express my gratitude. As you know,
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and my family stayed in your hotel
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week for our Annual Holiday. I enjoyed my rest and got the relaxation I need from work. I am
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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