Task 1: The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.

Task 1: The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050.
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The given line chart sets out New Zealand’s
population
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from 1950 to the present day and projections
to
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2050.
Overall
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, the demographical figures tell us that New Zealand has an ageing
population
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with the number of people aged between 35 and 64 and 65+ showing upward trends, with the former being projected to become the most prevalent
group
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by 2050. It is
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clear that the 15-34
group
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, albeit dominant from 1950 until the present day, is expected to go through a downturn by 2050. In 1950, New Zealand’s
population
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aged between 15 to 34 was 32.5%, ranking first among the 4 groups surveyed.
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was followed by the figure for the 0-14
group
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(27.5%), 35-64 (15%) and 65+ (10%).
Thereafter
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the 15-to-34 age
group
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, despite rising steadily to its high of 45% in the first half, saw a mild drop to 42.5% in 1990, followed by another steeper decline to only 30% in 2010. In the meantime, the
population
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aged between 0-14
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showed a steady downturn and eventually reached 20% in 2010,
whereas
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the two oldest groups 35 to 64 and over 65 experienced increases, with the figures amounting to 20% for the former and 15% for the latter. By 2050, New Zealand’s
population
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aged 35 to 64 and over 65 will have reached 35% and 20% respectively, with the former
group
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being projected to be the dominant part of the
population
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. Demographics for the two youngest groups,
on the other hand
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, are expected to drop, eventually amounting to a little lower than 30% for the 15-to-34
group
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and a negligible 10% for the 0-to-14
group
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuating trends
  • Projections
  • Percentage
  • Demographic changes
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Stable
  • Increase/Decrease
  • Growth/Decline
  • Patterns
  • Historical context
  • Population dynamics
  • Trends
  • Significant shifts
  • Peaks and troughs
  • Forecasts
  • Projections
  • Analysis
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