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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It is a crucial task to take care of infants and upbringing heir in any society. Because
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 , all parents should be demanded to participate in a course or tutorial that makes them
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good parents. I completely agree with the statement and I prove why I agree with a help of clues. Upbringing offspring is an important and challenging process for any father. Because
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they respond for their heir and their mental and physical health. Young mothers sometimes ignorantly look at their offspring. So , mothers need to attend a course because they encounter difficulties or sometimes due
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the lack of knowledge in growing a child , maybe they behave in a wrong way. But in my nation , these types of courses , mothers and fathers with the upbringing a child did not develop . Because my nation's account they do not have any kind of program . Mostly grandmothers help their
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 their grandchildren. But in my opinion decision of the mother-in-law is a rudimentary grasp .
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, if an infant will be sick , they do not allow to give a painkiller or call an ambulance. On oppositely there is a mind full of supervision. I intend to attend childcare courses before marriage to grow my children appropriately. I conclude that all parents should participate in these
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. It is crucial to cultivate a healthy , vigorous and clever child.
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