The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The chart illustrates a
rate
comparison between males and females in terms of habitual physical activity in Australia divided by age
section. At a glance, females from almost all groups score a higher percentage than males. Moreover
, the gaps between those two usually are in distance for the majority of categories
due to
significantly lower scores in just about all categories
of male groups.
On the male side of the graph, the age
of 15 to 24 is the point where male categories
reached their peak with the rate
of 52,8% and beat the percentage of the female group
. To add things much further
, the age
group
of 65 and over, come in second place with a quantitative score of 47% which is nearly identical to the female group
in the same age
span since it scores a figure of 46% . However
, the rest of the male categories
score a lower slice than the female categories
.
On the other hand
, the female kind dominates in about all sections except in the age
section of 15 to 24. Additionally
, It hits its peak in the age
categories
of 45 to 54 with a number of 53,3%. Even like that, the age
group
of 15 to 24 scores the lowest rate
among all groups and gets exceeded by the male category with a rate
of 47%.Submitted by regina.christella7 on
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