Some people today believe that the world increases in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society -Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Over the past few decades, there
have
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been
a
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sinificant
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significant
growth in
world
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the world
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population
and economy. It is a common public opinion that
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the reason for
global
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the global
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crisis is the
increasing
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of
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the
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population
.
While
other
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others
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believe that, for the growth of
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economy and society it is
neccessry
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necessary
to increase the
world
population
.
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.
To begin
with, the rising
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population
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the population
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will
leads
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to
world
condamination
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condemnation
contamination
. Human
beigns
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beings
being
uses more natural
resoures
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resources
like lake,Forest,Gas etc.. that will end up in
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polluted
world
.
For instance
, if
population
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increased they need shelters. Nowadays all cities and
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are maximum occupied by people. So they will try to construct
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a house
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house
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by cutting trees in the forest for living there. Another example is
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of
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vehicles
. In
the
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contemprory
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contemporary
society, every single family have
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or
three wheeler
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for their
conveneint
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convenient
transport.
This
will
leads
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to noise and air pollution. All these
resourses
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resources
are
inevitabel
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inevitable
for a human
beign
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being
life
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. So increase
pollutation
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pollution
result
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results
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in crisis and damage to the
world
.
on the other hand
, to some extent, growing of crowd will give some
benefical
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beneficial
advantage to the
world
economy and nation. In a
country
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there is
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Tax deduction is there for each item. So
devalopment
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development
developments
in the
population
gives more profit for the government. To cite an example,
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survey
conduted
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conducted
by MWCH
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2018, in a family of 9 members, approximately they are paying 40% of tax from the
montly
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monthly
income.
Hence
it
boost
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the
wellbeing
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well-being
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of a nation.
To conclude
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, from my point of view, it is
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a danger
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danger
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to increase the
population
.
Currenly
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Currently
Global issue is a warning alarm for many countries. Control birth rate is good for
world
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the world
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