In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Nowadays, the main
problem
in our society, Mainly
from
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major
cities
, is
people
suffers
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from
congestion
. In
this
essay, I will discuss what
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think is the reason and possible solution to reduce and solve the
congestion
in major
cities
. The first step
,
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is to first study what is exactly the main reason
of
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this
congestion
. I want to speak three
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for
this
one. First
is
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car
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the car
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now is much cheaper nowadays,
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. in
middle
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east, the automobile is more affordable to buy compared to other countries, because
the
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dont
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don't
have tax to buy vehicles here, and
that is
why it can cause
congestion
especially
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to
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major
cities
.
Secondly
, Some countries have very poor public transport, I suggest that government should make a concrete plan to build very good public transport
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so that
people
will ride the bus or train and not ride
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cars all the time.
Thirdly
is
over population
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and very narrow
road
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roads
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,
for example
, In
bangladesh
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Bangladesh
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,
this
country is very congested
especially
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in
there
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major
cities
, I saw it one time when
im
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I'm
watching
news
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, some
people
ride at the top of the train. Traffic problems
is
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a worldwide major
issues
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, Its very hard to solve, but if the government have
solid
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concrete plan and
study
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seriously on
this
one, it can definitely reduce
congestion
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problem
. I suggest that
the
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build more roads, railways and subways to ease the traffic, and
also
they build bicycle
lane
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so that cars and
bicycle loving
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people
have there on road to prevent
congestion
.
In
addition
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the
governement
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government
should make
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a partneship
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partneship
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partnership
whith
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with
which
the
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private companies so that it can implement faster solutions
for
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this
problem
. In conclusion, there are many possible reasons and solutions for
this
traffic
problem
in most countries, It is very hard to solve because of cheaper cars and
growing
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population nowadays, but in my opinion and suggestion, the government should impose road tax and vehicle tax, and urge the
people
to used public transport.
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