In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?
Nowadays, the main
problem
in our society, Mainly from
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in
cities
, is people
suffers
from Correct subject-verb agreement
suffer
congestion
. In this
essay, I will discuss what i
think is the reason and possible solution to reduce and solve the Change the capitalization
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congestion
in major cities
.
The first step,
is to first study what is exactly the main reason Remove the comma
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of
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for
this
congestion
. I want to speak three reason
for Change to a plural noun
reasons
this
one. First is
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car
now is much cheaper nowadays, Add an article
the car
For instance
. in middle
east, the automobile is more affordable to buy compared to other countries, because Correct article usage
the middle
the
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they
dont
have tax to buy vehicles here, and Correct your spelling
don't
that is
why it can cause congestion
especially
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,especially
to
major Change preposition
in
cities
. Secondly
, Some countries have very poor public transport, I suggest that government should make a concrete plan to build very good public transport,
so that Remove the comma
apply
people
will ride the bus or train and not ride there
cars all the time. Correct your spelling
their
Thirdly
is over population
and very narrow Correct your spelling
overpopulation
road
, Fix the agreement mistake
roads
for example
, In bangladesh
, Change the capitalization
Bangladesh
this
country is very congested especially
in Add the comma(s)
,especially
there
major Replace the word
their
cities
, I saw it one time when im
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I'm
news
, some Add an article
the news
people
ride at the top of the train.
Traffic problems is
a worldwide major Change the verb form
are
issues
, Its very hard to solve, but if the government have Change the noun form
issue
solid
concrete plan and Add an article
a solid
study
seriously on Replace the word
studies
this
one, it can definitely reduce congestion
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the congestion
problem
. I suggest that the
build more roads, railways and subways to ease the traffic, and Correct your spelling
they
also
they build bicycle lane
so that cars and Fix the agreement mistake
lanes
bicycle loving
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bicycle-loving
people
have there on road to prevent congestion
. In
addition
the Add a comma
,addition
governement
should make Correct your spelling
government
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a partneship
partneship
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partnership
whith
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with
which
the
private companies so that it can implement faster solutions Correct article usage
apply
for
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to
this
problem
.
In conclusion, there are many possible reasons and solutions for this
traffic problem
in most countries, It is very hard to solve because of cheaper cars and growing
population nowadays, but in my opinion and suggestion, the government should impose road tax and vehicle tax, and urge the Correct article usage
the growing
people
to used public transport.Submitted by rubenellaurino on
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