The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the use of
the
fuel in the USA from 1980 to 2030.
Correct article usage
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Overall
, Petrol and Oil have a huge lead on consumption the Linking Words
usage
of Petrol and Oil constantly rising. Coal and Natural Gas stand in Use synonyms
second
and third position and steadily fluctuates over time. Meanwhile, Nuclear,Solar and Use synonyms
Hydropower
Use synonyms
usage
is lowest and steadily the same.
First of all, Petrol and oil tend to rise over time, in the beginning, in 1980, Use synonyms
usage
was only 35 Use synonyms
quadrillion
units but in the future prediction consumption is nearly 50 Use synonyms
quadrillion
units. Natural gas was the Use synonyms
second
one in 1980. After 1980, the Use synonyms
usage
of coal slightly increased and catches natural gas. For future projections, coal Use synonyms
usage
will nearly double and will be the Use synonyms
second
one in the energy industry.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, In 1980, nuclear, solar and Linking Words
hydropower
used nearly 5 Use synonyms
quadrillion
units. Over time, Nuclear takes the lead with over 5 Use synonyms
quadrillion
Use synonyms
usage
. Solar and Use synonyms
Hydropower
fluctuate for a Use synonyms
while
but for future predictions solar energy is going to pass Linking Words
hydropower
energy will be Use synonyms
second
between the three of them and fifth in general.Use synonyms
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