The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart gives information about the percentage of network transactions for the retail areas in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, the biggest amount of online sales in 2003 are about travel and in 2013 most people preferred music and film.
To begin
with, in 2003 most users choose to buy things from the travel district, about 36%. The second sector that was common for buyers was clothes, nearly 24%, and less than 3% was entertainment zone with 21%. According to
the data the last
one, with least percentage had the book part, with only 19%.
In 2013, the highest percentages of sales were in movies and songs zone, approximately 33%,
and less than 4% was tourism services consisting of 29%. Remove the comma
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After
this
, the books zone made up about 22%, which rose to 3% from 2003 when it was 19%. In addition
, the last
region was clothing with just 16%, less than it was in 2003.Submitted by miss.garlic2021 on
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