Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. ??

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Whether leaders or directors of organizations should be old
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or young
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is being widely discussed currently. From my perspective, I think young
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should lead the team. The reason that young
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are suitable to become
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leader
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leaders
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is that they have
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ability
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in acquiring new
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, they may have greater advantages in some new areas like the Internet.
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have the willingness and
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technology as they are less experienced than old
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. They may be more broadminded and can easily accept new thoughts, which makes them understand current trends and make plans that are suitable to deal with new problems.
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old
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are more experienced than young
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, which is a significant advantage. As they have been working for a long
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, they may experience some complex
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and enough practice to deal with those problems
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may get nervous or have no idea about what to do when they face some accidents. What’s more, old
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are less moody, which makes them steady and think twice before making decisions. In my point of view, I think that leaders can
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young
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. They have stronger bodies so they are less likely to be ill, which gives them
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ability
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and higher
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. What’s more,
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, young
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may be more concentrated when working
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old
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have to relax from
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to
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, so young
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may work more efficiently and effectively.
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young
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may not get married, so they do not need to worry about work-life balance. They may put most of their
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work and leadership,
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have to spare some
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their
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