Some people think that it's good for a country's culture if people watch some imported film or TV programs while some people argue that it could be better if people watch films of their own culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A portion of
people
support
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that watching
foreign
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a foreign
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film and
TV
programs are good for a
country
's
culture
whereas
the
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others debate that watching national
films
are better. In my opinion, watching
films
from various sources including
people
's own
culture
is the best for a
country
's
culture
. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both of their views and support my opinion. First of all, foreign
TV
shows give
people
a wide view of
habits
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the habits
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and activities of different cultures. To illustrate, they can learn about other
culture
's food
habit
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habits
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, social norms, history, fashion,
constitution
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and constitution
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and
this
knowledge can be introduced
in
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into
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their own
culture
.
For example
, by watching a Norwegian
TV
series about the Vikings, I come to know about their history and
culture
also
the
english
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TV
series named 'Friends' gives me
the
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vivid idea of
80s
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the 80s
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and 90s New York city life.
On the other hand
, watching
own
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their own
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cultural
films
engage
people
with cultural views and norms and help them to respect and sustain these values. To demonstrate, national television shows are
containted
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contained
contented
with information, social up and downs,
good
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the good
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and bad side of many contemporary
situation
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situations
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.
These
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helps
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help
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people
to be aware of the
country
's urgency. Like, once there was a tragic
activites
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activity
going on
my
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in my
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country
, throwing acid
to
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girls. National
TV
shows created awareness about
this
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acts and
applicable
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the applicable
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punishment of
this
deed. In conclusion, watching foreign
films
shape one's
culture
by
introducting
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introducing
norms and activities from other's
culture
. It
also
create
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respect
to
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for
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others
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others'
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belief.
However
, national shows help
people
to attach
with
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to
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national issues and matters.
Also
, it reminds them
their
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of their
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own
culture
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views and not to divert from
it
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drastically.
That is
why
,
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my opinion is to watch
films
or
TV
show
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shows
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from all the sources available including one's own
culture
for
culture
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development.
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