Some people think that it's good for a country's culture if people watch some imported film or TV programs while some people argue that it could be better if people watch films of their own culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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others debate that watching national

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essay, I am going to discuss both of their views and support my opinion. First of all, foreign

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and activities of different cultures. To illustrate, they can learn about other

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and 90s New York city life.

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and bad side of many contemporary

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girls. National

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deed. In conclusion, watching foreign

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shape one's

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national issues and matters.

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views and not to divert from

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drastically.

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my opinion is to watch

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from all the sources available including one's own

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Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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