Nowadays movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have negative effect on the society and should be banned, others, however, believe that it is harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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society, whether

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should be banned or not

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their potential to have negative impacts. For

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believes crimes and

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movies and

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should not be banned

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may have

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impact on them.

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can happen since

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still in their developing process mentally and logically.

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still cannot

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between reality and fiction.

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case that two

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moves, and it caused one of them

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is lethal

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if implemented in the real life.

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negatively

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and something like that. On the other side,

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are really different in terms of processing the

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, criminal, or even gore

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and logic are developed, they definitely can separate reality and fiction without ease.

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a criminal

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they just treat the criminal

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for entertainment purposes.

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, for

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criminal and

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or film are not dangerous.

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serious threats

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phase mentally and logically. On the other side,

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mental and logic are

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enough to receive

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or criminal

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it will be harmful

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that.

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not

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it. In spite

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suggests that we should just have stricter age

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to access

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kind of content. With that, the

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ultimately believes it will better-off

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society as a whole.