Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how

English

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very

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important

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as it

is consider

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is considered

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a global way of communication, recently most

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the

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countries are focusing on teaching it

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whether

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as a first or second

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school

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because it is the most common

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to be able to cope with other nations. In

the

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essay

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I'm going to share my opinion about how much is it important to learn

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and how to save our native languages. It is obvious nowadays that

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is a worldwide and effective way that

enable

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enables

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the

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people from

allover

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all over

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the world to communicate easily and understand each other through it.

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, learning

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might be very difficult for some countries

such

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as India, China and many other countries who face some

obstecals

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obstacles

when trying to

pronouncing

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letters.

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may affect the probability of

these country

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this country

these countries

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to accept

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as a second

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Nevertheless

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, some of

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this

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nations are scared that if

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has

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been teaching

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the

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school

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for kids

these

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growing population might only use it and forget about their own

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espicially

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especially

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since

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this

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is spreading so fast. If

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is been taught in all communities, it is thought that one day the local languages will disappear. In my

opinion

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this

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is not a big issue as long as people can talk to each other I don't see it as a big concern.

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, some nations do not accept

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idea and they still

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their

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and no other in order to save it. I

belive

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that in order to be able to balance

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these two ideas;

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has to be

taought

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taught

in the latest years starting from high

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until university

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can give the students the chance to have

strong

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base from their native

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and

also

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learning

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new

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can help them in the future.

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English

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is the most common

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in the world and it facilitates

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communication between so many

diffrent

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different

regions. I think it doesn't matter

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whether

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you use it

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early or later in life.

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, for sure it has a great impact on local languages. In my opinion

delying

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delaying

denying

the

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subject in

school

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might solve the issue.

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Feb 18, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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369 words

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global communication
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