Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how

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important

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a global way of communication, recently most

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countries are focusing on teaching it

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to be able to cope with other nations. In

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I'm going to share my opinion about how much is it important to learn

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and how to save our native languages. It is obvious nowadays that

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is a worldwide and effective way that

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people from

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the world to communicate easily and understand each other through it.

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, learning

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might be very difficult for some countries

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as India, China and many other countries who face some

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letters.

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may affect the probability of

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to accept

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nations are scared that if

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growing population might only use it and forget about their own

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is spreading so fast. If

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is been taught in all communities, it is thought that one day the local languages will disappear. In my

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is not a big issue as long as people can talk to each other I don't see it as a big concern.

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, some nations do not accept

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their

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and no other in order to save it. I

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that in order to be able to balance

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these two ideas;

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in the latest years starting from high

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until university

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can give the students the chance to have

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base from their native

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can help them in the future.

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is the most common

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in the world and it facilitates

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communication between so many

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different

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you use it

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early or later in life.

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, for sure it has a great impact on local languages. In my opinion

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delaying

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might solve the issue.

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