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You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days after purchase it has stopped working. You spoken to the company representative a week ago but the phone has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter -introduce yourself -explain the situation -say what action you would like to company to take

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Injun Lee who left my new mobile
phone
 to fix in your
repair
service
 centre. I left my
phone
 in your place to get
repair
service
 on the 19th of August around 3pm. I am concerned about the delay
of
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repair
service
 since it is significantly important for me to contact others through my mobile
phone
 which has a number of contact numbers to deal with my business tasks. I bought it in your shop two weeks ago on the 8th of August and
while
 I was having a
phone
 call with one of my co-workers, it has been shut down. And, It was not able to turn on again to utilise it and I found out there were some faults on the cell
phone
. I couldn’t figure out the reason for not working since it was turned off during the
phone
 call. I really want your organisation to get the
repair
service
 done as fast as you can as I haven’t acquired any hearings from your company and it is being delayed than the expected time you explained to me.
Also
, please let me know
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warranty can be offered or if I have to make a payment for the
service
. Kind regards Injun Lee
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