A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,

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Dear Temi, It is with great pleasure I write to you. I learnt that you have recently changed your
school
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; congratulations! I hope you are settling in well enough. I understand that making
friends
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is giving you a tough time, especially knowing that you had good
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in your previous
school
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. Well, there are various ways of making good
friends
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,
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can be by joining extra curriculum activities in your new
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, paying your classmates a visit during a festive period or a celebration. Adding to
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, actively participating in
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events like inter-house sports,
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and Christmas
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carols can help you make
friends
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. Me , I made
friends
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in the library, by discovering we had
a similar interests
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similar interests
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in novels. Having
friends
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helps your social life, and you have someone to share your thoughts with. I strongly believe that when you engage yourself in
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activities, you will make good
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. I advise that you
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show kind gestures to your classmates by giving gifts. In conclusion,
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make life beautiful, thank you for the gift of our friendship. I cannot wait to receive your letter telling me about your new
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. Yours sincerely, Feyi.
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