Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

A lot of
people
hate their
job
or
have
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actually not
have
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the right skills to do the
job
.
In other words
: many employees have a
job
which they should not be doing.
This
is because
,
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It was normal that
men
would
study
for ‘’male
jobs
’’ and
women
would
study
for ‘’female
jobs
’’ in the 20th century. Another reason is that many
people
that being able to
study
is a gift because many
people
can not afford it. In the 20th
century
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it was totally normal that
men
would
study
for male
jobs
and
women
would
study
for female
jobs
. The reason
of
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this
is that
,
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it was inappropriate
toaccording
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to according
according
the society for
men
to do female
jobs
and for
women
to do male
jobs
.
For example
,
men
and
women
went to
separated
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schools. They were not able to
study
what they actually wanted.
People
who were born into poor families, could not go to school because of money issues.
For instance
, many poor
people
are doing a
job
where it is not necessary to have a degree. Money problems have had a big effect on the lives of poor
people
The consequence is that the efficiency of the work will decrease. They just do the
job
because someone told them to or because it was a
job
where no qualification was needed. Another disadvantage is that
jobs
have a big influence on the quality of life and
this
quality will
also
decrease if
people
will continue to do the same
job
.
To conclude
, there are several reasons why
people
are unhappy with their
job
. They were not allowed to
study
what they actually wanted or they were just too poor to provide themselves with a good
study
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dread
  • passion
  • inherent talent
  • fufilling
  • career
  • job
  • fulfilled
  • unhappy
  • unsatisfied
  • work-life balance
  • burnout
  • stress
  • depression
  • anxiety
  • self-esteem
  • emotional well-being
  • potential
  • achieve
  • success
  • personal growth
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