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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages
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The pie chart compares data about British student who was able to speak different
languages
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 at the university of England in the
year
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 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, The chart shows that
students
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 were more interested in some
languages
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 and their interests gradually increase over the
years
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.
However
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, there are some similarities between the given time.
Firstly
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, Let us look at those
students
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 who were able to speak more. It is noticeable that for
both
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years
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 the Spanish
language
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 was the highest: 65%. If we see
according to
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years
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, it was 30% in the
year
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 2000 and 35% in 2010.Another
language
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 was the second most interesting
language
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 that
students
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 learned and
also
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 it was the second largest percentage for
both
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years
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. Turning now to similarities and least interesting
languages
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. Two other
languages
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 and German remained the same in
both
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years
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. It was 10% with the least interest of
students
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.
However
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, no other
language
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 and french
students
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 were good at learning in the
year
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 2000, but somehow in the
year
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 2010 they have shown less interest in
both
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languages
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 and it
also
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 faces a downward trend.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, year, students, years, both, language with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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