The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages
The pie chart compares data about British student who was able to speak different
languages
at the university of England in the
year
2000 and 2010.
Overall
, The chart shows that
students
were more interested in some
languages
and their interests gradually increase over the
years
.
However
, there are some similarities between the given time.
Firstly
, Let us look at those
students
who were able to speak more. It is noticeable that for
both
years
the Spanish
language
was the highest: 65%. If we see
according to
years
, it was 30% in the
year
2000 and 35% in 2010.Another
language
was the second most interesting
language
that
students
learned and
also
it was the second largest percentage for
both
years
. Turning now to similarities and least interesting
languages
. Two other
languages
and German remained the same in
both
years
. It was 10% with the least interest of
students
.
However
, no other
language
and french
students
were good at learning in the
year
2000, but somehow in the
year
2010 they have shown less interest in
both
languages
and it
also
faces a downward trend.
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