The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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The provided pie charts illustrate the average proportions in terms of three types of nutrition (

sodium

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, saturated fat,

sugar

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) in four meal types (

breakfast

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, lunch,

dinner

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snacks

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) in the USA.

Overall

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, people have consumed higher proportions of

sugar

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and fat for

dinner

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while

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having much

sugar

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for

snacks

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Besides

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, the least percentage of all three nutrients have been used for

breakfast

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Firstly

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, the highest percentage of

sodium

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is used in

dinner

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which is accounted for 43%. Meanwhile, the lowest of 14%

sodium

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is included in morning dishes

as well as

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snacks

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. At lunchtime, people consumed 29% of

sodium

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On the other hand

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, the highest percentage of oil is used in

dinner

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which is 37% and the lowest is for

breakfast

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which is 16%. For lunch and

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snacks

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,snacks

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Fox has eaten oil at 21% and 26% respectively.In terms of extra

sugar

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, 42% is included in

snacks

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while

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23% in

dinner

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However

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, folks have used 19% of added

sugar

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in the afternoon meal.

Finally

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, the lowest of 16% of

sugar

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was consumed in

breakfast

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meals.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, breakfast, dinner, snacks with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nutrients
Unhealthy
Daily intake
Percentage
Carbohydrates
Fats
Proteins
Meals
Balanced diet
Consumption
Excess
Health implications
Obesity
Diabetes
Heart disease
Convenience foods
Fast foods
Socioeconomic factors
Lifestyle choices
Healthy eating habits
Dietary recommendations

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Some people believe that having a job you enjoy is more important than earning a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion

Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction? * Social media networks = messaging and information exchange systems such as Facebook and Twitter.