The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The chart compares the proportions of regular physical
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males and Use synonyms
females
in six age categories who were physically active on a regular basis in the year 2010.
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adults did some kind of routine physical Use synonyms
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males aged 35 to 44 did the least physical Linking Words
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In the youngest age category (15 to 24), almost 53% of Use synonyms
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, between the ages of 25 and 44, men were much less active on average than women. In fact, in the 35 to 44 age group, a mere 39.5% of males did some form of regular exercise, compared to 52.5% of Linking Words
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Between the ages of 45 and 64, the figure for male physical Use synonyms
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the proportion of active Linking Words
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remained around 8% higher, at 53%. Use synonyms
Finally
, the percentages of Linking Words
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women and men aged 65 and over who exercised regularly were almost identical, at approximately 47%.Use synonyms
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