A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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present times, some
people
argues
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that social status and material accomplishments are the basis to define an individual’s value and chivalrous
behaviors
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are out of the picture.
However
, I completely oppose
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this
view.
To begin
, some
people
tend to seek validation from others
through
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acquiring earthly things for the reason that it
further
feeds their ego and somehow boosts their self-confidence.
In addition
, it has become a fetish
to
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some to gain self-satisfaction and gratification
otherwise
, society itself will make them invisible.
Therefore
, these
people
are most likely to aspire more in
this
aspect and eventually not
realizing
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they are becoming one of those
people
who are rude, greedy, and
seeks
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attention.
However
, classic attitudes and
behaviors
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are the true gems a person can possess as
it
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they
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can be passed on to multiple generations and nobody can ever steal
it
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them
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from an individual who encompasses them. For the elders, it is
yhe
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the
only thing that can be inherited by younger generations. To be trustworthy, kindhearted and a person full of
honor
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honour
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are things that are very much irreplaceable and priceless that no amount of money can equate it.
In addition
, if more
people
can practice it in their day-to-day routine it is like a contagious disease but rather good that can be spread to many.
To conclude
, I am on the extreme side a person’s worth cannot be solely based on social ranking and material possessions.
Therefore
, primitive values are of much importance as in can never be replaced nor
foresaken
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forsaken
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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