The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of house owners and renters in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
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houses rather than buy. Over time, Use synonyms
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the rent
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accommadation
. Until 1971 rented Correct your spelling
accommodation
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lead
of the housing after that owned passed the Replace the word
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accommodation
and takes the lead.
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their own house. In time, households tend to quit Change the verb form
have
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rent
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renting
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for
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accommodation
. Between 1953 and 2001 owned Replace the word
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accommodation
constantly rose.
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accommodation
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accommodation
falls until 2001 and slightly rose to nearly 40% in 2011.Use synonyms
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