The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of house owners and renters in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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people tend to

rent

houses rather than buy. Over time,

rent

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the rent

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accommodation

rate goes down and people were buying houses for

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accommadation

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accommodation

. Until 1971 rented

accommodation

was the

lead

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of the housing after that owned passed the

rent

accommodation

and takes the lead. In the beginning, Over 70

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of

the

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people rents

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a house

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house

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for living and nearly 20%

households

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of households

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has

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their own house. In time, households tend to quit

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and started to buy houses

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for

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accommodation

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. Between 1953 and 2001 owned

accommodation

constantly rose. The owned

accommodation

goes up and reaches the peak point

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2001 which

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nearly 70

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and decreased slightly in 2011.

On the other hand

, rented

accommodation

falls until 2001 and slightly rose to nearly 40% in 2011.