the diagram below shows the provess for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information b selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The photo shows

about

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the process of plastic

recycle

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recycling

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and

reproduce

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reproducing

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new products.

Firstly

, people throw plastic bottles into the

recycle

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recycled

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trash

car

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cars

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Secondly

, the garbage

trunk

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truck

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came to take it.

Thirdly

, when those bottles arrived in recycle

center

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, the staff will sort with

different

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in case people throw the wrong garbage.

Then

, the bottles will compress into blocks and crush to become peels. After washing

peels

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the peels

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, put

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them

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in a machine to produce plastic pellets which

also

have to be heated by raw material. And the second final step is

raw

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the raw

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material which is ready to be reproduced for new products.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the cities is increasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?