The charts below show the percentage in typical meals of three types if nutrient, all of which maybe unhealthy if eaten too much.
The given pie charts illustrate
an
average percentage of three nutrients in 4 different meals in the USA. Correct article usage
the
Overall
, it is clear that
dinner is the unhealthiest meal in their diet while
breakfast is the healthiest.
43% of American`s
Change noun form
American
dinner
contains Sodium and 37% of it contains fat, these factors make dinner the most harmful meal among all four. 42% of their Snack has added sugar which is as much Fix the agreement mistake
dinners
all
other nutrients combined and Change preposition
as all
thus
, Snack is the second unhealthiest meal in the US. However
. the healthiest food that the
Americans consume throughout the day is breakfast which contains 10% of fat sugar and 14% of Sodium Correct article usage
apply
and
considering that all nutrients do not even Correct word choice
apply
make up
50% of breakfast , it is the healthiest and causes the least amount of harm compared to other 3.Join the words
makeup
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