The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar frim sugar cane. summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the production steps for using

sugar

cane to make

sugar

.

Overall

, the process

consist

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of 7 main stages including harvesting, crushing

canes

, drying and cooling the

sugar

. To

began

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,

sugar

canes

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cane

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usually

takes

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take

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around 12 to 18 months for growing.

Then

, the harvesting of

sugar

canes

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cane

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can be done by using

big

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a big

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JCB which will take less time, or it can be done by using the old method, where farmers will cut the

canes

manually.

Following

this

,

big

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a big

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machine will be used for crushing the

sugar

leaves and

convert

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converting

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it

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them

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to

a

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apply

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fresh juice.

Next,

the extracted juice will be purified by using limestone filters. After that, a huge

continor

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container

will be filled with the purified

jucie

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juice

and

place

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it

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apply

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on

a

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fire for heating up, until the water

evaporate

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evaporates

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, and

this

step is to ensure of making syrup. Centrifuge separator will be used to separate the

sugar

crystais

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crystals

from the syrup.

Finally

, the collected

suger

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sugar

will be

dryed

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dried

and cooled.