The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at rhe beginning of the 21st Century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
The maps
illilustrate
the development which took place in the Correct your spelling
illustrate
town
of Harton between the years 2008 and 2016.
It is clear that
Harton became more industrial with less woodland area over the eight years.
The mostly
noticeable is that one of the residential areas in the south Replace the word
most
part
of the town
was developed into the
industrial complex which was enlarged by 2016. The other residential zone and arts centre had turned into the shopping centre and multi-screen cinema in the Correct article usage
an
west
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western
part
of the town
.
Moreover
, a big lake located in
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northeast
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the northeast
in
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of
woodland
changed into a small Correct article usage
the woodland
fond
. Correct your spelling
pond
Further
developments were occurred
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occurred
have occurred
on
the area of Change preposition
in
old
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the old
town
in the north, which was divided into two parts. One part
was alloted
to the offices and the other to the university.
The final transformation was the replacement of the derelict warehouse sector with the car park zone in the north Correct your spelling
allocated
allotted
allowed
part
of the town
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