The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at rhe beginning of the 21st Century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

The maps below show the changes experienced by the town of Harton at rhe beginning of the 21st Century.  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.
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The maps
illilustrate
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illustrate
the development which took place in the
town
of Harton between the years 2008 and 2016.
It is clear that
Harton became more industrial with less woodland area over the eight years. The
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noticeable is that one of the residential areas in the south
part
of the
town
was developed into
the
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industrial complex which was enlarged by 2016. The other residential zone and arts centre had turned into the shopping centre and multi-screen cinema in the
west
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part
of the
town
.
Moreover
, a big lake located
in
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northeast
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the northeast
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in
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woodland
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changed into a small
fond
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.
Further
developments
were occurred
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on
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the area of
old
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the old
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town
in the north, which was divided into two parts. One
part
was
alloted
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allocated
allotted
allowed
to the offices and the other to the university. The final transformation was the replacement of the derelict warehouse sector with the car park zone in the north
part
of the
town
.
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