‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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some points. There are

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several

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parents

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careers

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would result in leaving their

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nursery

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showed that

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parents

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probably

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society is developing and changing

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a very fast

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behaviour. It can

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that

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, using those high

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age. When I was younger I lived in the

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didn't

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kids

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may

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kids

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twice a week.

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that

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increasing

and it can have a negative impact on our society, because if

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respecting

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they are not going to

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recommend

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spend more time with their

children

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provide

them with the

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attention

they need.

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‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

With the growing population of cities, more and more people live in homes that have little or no outdoor area. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Prevention is more important than cure. researching and treating disease is very costly, so it is better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people's lives and should receive more funding. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?