‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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some points. There are

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several

reasons why the number of

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parents

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careers

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would result in leaving their

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nursery

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showed that

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from the age of 1 to 7 need the most

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attention

from

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parents

so leaving them for hours would most

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probably

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for the

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society is developing and changing

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a very fast

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behaviour. It can

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argued

that

kids

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, using those high

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age. When I was younger I lived in the

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was

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with our ipads I used to learn new words and use them with my

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parents

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disnt

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didn't

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kids

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may

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sound

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important for

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and to provide

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kids

with other

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taking them to the park or the beach at

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twice a week.

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personly

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that

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increasing

and it can have a negative impact on our society, because if

kids

are not

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respecting

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they are not going to

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result

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problems

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. I strongly

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recommend

parent

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spend more time with their

children

and

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provide

them with the

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attention

they need.

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