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You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student at JNU and I am
writting
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writing
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 letter to apply for a part-time job
for
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 the position of
a
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Post office clerk which I have seen in an advertisement in today's newspaper. I
have
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worked as a receptionist at an international hotel during my
last
 summer vacation. I have
a
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good communication skills and I am a quick learner too .
Moreover
, I have worked as a sales representative at Kia motors and I have the ability to blend with the team.
Therefore
, I will be meeting your job
requiremnets
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requirements
 for a postal clerk.
Furthermore
, it will be beneficial for my career growth as I am looking to join
this
 organization once I finish my degree. I want to be a part of postal services and serve the nation.
This
 job opportunity could provide me
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good knowledge and experience. Kindly, consider my profile for the
postision
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 of Postal Clerk. I am looking forward to a positive response from your end. Yours
failthfully
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faithfully
, Mohammad
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