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The table shows the proportion of sales of a bookstore from 4 different sales categories, with a projection for 2025. Write a report, highlight key features and compare.

The table graph gives information about the percentages of
sales
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 of a bookshop. The data compare figures collected in 2015 and 2020 and
it’s
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its
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 predicted
numberof
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number of
sales
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 by 2025.
Overall
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, non-fiction
books
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 had the highest purchase from the start of the study but will
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probably
 end up in second
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. Meanwhile,
magazines
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 will more likely remain
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place
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 as having the least
sales
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. In detail, 52% per cent of non-fiction
books
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 were sold in 2015,
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, textbooks came in second
place
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 with a proportion of
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less than
1% for a quarter.
In addition
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, fiction,
magazines
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, and newspapers shared the same number with only 12% in the same year. Five years later,
although
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 there was a significant drop of 12%, non-fiction
books
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 retained their
place
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 at the top with the highest
sales
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 among other counterparts. Fiction made its way as second with 32% per cent
while
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 textbooks,
magazines
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, and newspapers are at the bottom two with 19% and 11%, respectively. By 2025, a different trend is projected for fiction
books
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 as it will rise to 58% of
sales
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whereas
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 for non-fiction will be down to a fifth.
Moreover
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, textbooks,
magazines
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, and newspaper are more likely to have the same fate as it was in 2015 with 12% and a tenth of the proportion, respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, place, magazines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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